
Pairings Goten/Bra and hints of Vegita/Bulma & Goku/Chichi. Rating R for some sexual content, adult situations, and a bit of cursing in Japanese. Japanese word translations can be found in the Japanese Glossary Disclaimer I don’t own DBZ, if I did, this fic would be famous. This fic is based in DB GT although it ignores a lot of it.
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Bra and Goten are perfect for each other. Their similar and contrasting personalities make them the ideal couple. She’s fiery, feisty, smart, beautiful, a bit arrogant and half-Saiya-jin. Goten is passionate, easygoing, handsome, healthily confident and also half-Saiya-in… Mix and watch the sparks fly!!
The age difference, you ask? Oh, that just makes it more interesting and challenging. They are meant to be. I can’t picture them with anyone else.
Bra has always loved Goten, even before she knew what romantic love was all about. Now, she is almost twenty year old and entirely resigned to the fact Goten will never be hers. This doesn’t stop her from fantasizing, of course.
On the other hand, Goten is thirty one years old and just broke up with long-time girlfriend, Paris. He’s noticed Bra has turned into a woman practically overnight. She’s still a bit flighty, impatient and very girly, but there’s so much more under the surface. She’s become lovelier than he could have ever imagined. But, she’s his best friend’s little sister and he could never, not in a million years even remotely consider it. Bra’s totally, one hundred percent off limits.
Or is she?
Enter some booze, heavy flirting, a wonderful and passionate make out session, realizations, a breathlessly romantic tale of love and passion, Saiya-jin bonding and a lot of misunderstandings and family meddling and you get….
Just a Kiss.
I started writing this fanfic back in 2002 and left it unfinished it in 2003 after writing 13 chapters. Real life intruded. I got married in 2004, moved twice, just basically got too busy. Then I got divorced in November of 2007 and decided to continue this story, even if I had abandoned it for almost four years…
Now chapters 14 and on have been posted and the end is near.
I just finished updating and rewriting parts of this fic. I added more scenes between the Vegita family, softened Goten’s attitude a little, -even though he’s still more feral than we’re used to, but there’s a reason for that… corrected a lot of mistakes and re-wrote certain sections like the one when Goten barges into Bra and Giovanni. Oops, sorry for the spoiler… *big grin*.
This fic is has also been beta-read by Satu-D-2 and is in the process of being beta read by Raditz Silver. Most recently Trynia Merin has helped me with the later chapters. Thanks guys!!!!
In any case, if you used to like this fic and have come back, I would recommend you re-read it because it’s changed some and it has been a while since I wrote it, so you might not remember a l lot of it. If there are still some fans of this story around, I am so very, very happy!
This is by no means my first fic. I’ve been writing dbz stories since 1997 but a lot of them are not publishable -they might be somewhere in the net, to my embarrassment- and this is my first longer continuous fic, well, after the Vega stories which were pretty much connected one-shots.
In other words, this is my baby so pretty please, be nice to it… *big Goku eyes*.
That pic up there was drawn by Katy Romance, and you can visit her deviant art profile here